Your original wasnot too great, but hhis was much better, the lead-in much more captivating!
Did you compose this?
Is this composed by you alone? If so, this is pretty good. Sorry to hear about your family. Peace be with you.
I'm a tough judge though. Longer. This is a WIP. You can use this to go somewhere. Add to it, expand on it, and I think you may have something. This doesn't loop very well, so make it a song!
7 seems like a high score for a tough judge...but I'll take it. ;)
This song entered a point where I couldn't think of anything to add to it without a decline in quality.
It's a valid point, though.
That little repetitive whistley sound is annoying. Other than that criticism, this is a good loop, energetic, cartoony. I like it.
You're right about the whistley sound. Now I can't seem so ignore it!
I agree with Zaros301
This is GREAT, only complaint is overall sound quality feels garbled, maybe the levels need to be adjusted on the track. The feel is right, the tune is right, and this is less choppy than your other work. keep at it, you can only get better!
I'm a little disappointed
I've been a huge fan of MMX soundtracks, and remixes forever. I like most of your stuff, but I got to say, this is my favorite track, and it wasn't that good. I'' write a review for a good one. But look, this track is supposed to be a bit airy, with a crspness to it. I suggest trying it again, but while actually playing the level. Get an image in your head, of what the level feels like, and make the music reflect that. Other than, hey you're doing fine!
I must be hearing the remastered version, because this sounds great. I think you are making huge leaps! Congrats on your baptismal! God Bless!
Haha, looks like you already saw the piece anyway =P. Thanks man, when I get my next piece done hopefully it will be a leap beyond this too ;). I'll have to keep up with you, seeing how we both only put out a song every few months =).
Thanks for the congratulatory remarks!
God Bless you too.
Not bad at all.
A little more heavy handed than what this song is designed for, I believe it still has a good sound. The intro is the best. The majority of it sounds rather brash however. Good job overall!
Screw those hippy bastards!
Hey you're doing fine! I get these lame bastards whining about the repetitiveness of my stuff all the time, but it is DANCE music, every club on the planet has repetitive stuff! I like ths jungle ambiance, and I think your work is coming a looong way! Keep it up, I'm proud of you!
Haha, you tell em' man. Yeah I know about the repetitive thing, I try to ignore it but when you listen to any song there is SOMETHING going on during nearly the entire song except during certain parts, only some jazz and classical that I can think of are possible exceptions to that. Thanks man, I should have better stuff out by the end of summer though =).
Mine too! I have a good one based off of P.D., but for some reason every time I export to mp3, my computer f's it up! grrrr!
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